My critique of this project went well, with largely positive feedback. There were a few small changes, one of which was part of the prologue game. I previously had it to start on delay, but I should have actually had it start with a button, due to there being text to read. This is something I should have thought of to begin with, as it makes sense for a kid’s app. Because of the variety of reading ages, there wouldn’t be a set amount of time that users would take to read the text, so including a button was an important change. Other than that, my feedback was positive which I was really pleased with.

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